Mika Brzezinski learned a valuable lesson after being 'let go' at a high point in her career at CBS on her 39th birthday; she learned how to be a better parent.
Huffington Post- http://www.huffingtonpost.com/mika-brzezinski/getting-fired-and-how-it_b_342298.html
What was the valuable lesson that she learned? Did it say why she was fired? You kept your article short, but it seems like you left out some important information. I think you could have included some more information since you only have one sentence. Otherwise, nice job.
ReplyDeleteRachel,
ReplyDeleteThe valuable lesson she learned was on how to be a better parent. I wanted to focus on that, instead of why she was let go. I understand what you're saying though. Thank you for commenting.
Ok, well when I was reading the article it sounded like she lied about being fired or something? To her kids...and then she learned her lesson that she should have just told them the truth. I don't know...maybe I read it wrong.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Rachel - it sound like it's a really strong lead for the beginning of a news story! But it's not much of a summary, because it's an unfinished thought.
ReplyDeleteI was intrigued at first too, and it made me want to read the rest of the story.